The Story Machine Diagnostic

Build a Story Machine That Matches Your Growth

Your pitch works. But only when you're in the room.

This workshop is for you if:

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Deals stall unless you personally jump in.

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Your website, deck, and marketing sound like three different companies wrote them.

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Prospects ask what you do again after you've already told them.

What it is

A free 60-minute working session for seed and Series A founders. Cameras on, closed door, five seats.

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Live one-liner rewrite

What you get

Your pitch, rewritten in the room — so it works when you're not there.

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The plot hole audit

What you get

The exact line that's costing you deals, named on the call.

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Five founders, one table

What you get

Sharp peers who spot what your team is too close to see.

How it works

It starts with a 2-minute diagnostic. You'll get an instant read on where your story is stuck — and if the room's a fit, your seat.

Where it's worked

The Track Record

Care Access logo

$100M+ Sector Leader

Anchored brand strategy to shift from a 'trial-first' model to a 'patient-first' paradigm, unlocking massive geographic scale.

Marketing

Helaina logo

You brought so much clarity to our story that goes beyond our pitch deck. It became both visual and verbal storytelling for the rest of our assets.

SVP of Strategy

WorldStrides logo

Boundless invested the time to understand our very complex business and multiple stakeholders, and guided us to an outcome of clarity in our story.

SVP of Marketing

Broadridge logo

Our CEO saw it [the campaign] and said, yeah, that's absolutely trusted and transformative. That was a huge win and relief.

Global Head of Brand

The Real Cost

Inconsistent messaging doesn't just confuse buyers. It costs you deals you never knew you lost.

When your story only works when you're in the room, the true cost shows up in three places:

Your Bandwidth

Growth is capped at your personal capacity because every major deal has to route directly through you.

Your Capital

You spend thousands building websites, decks, and marketing assets on top of a story that is fundamentally stuck.

Your Velocity

Sales cycles drag out because your team has to spend extra calls fixing polite confusion.